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Dear Ma'ayan,..33333333333333333333333333333333... .27.12.08

How are you? Is everything OK in the hospital? I hope your disease doesn't make you feel miserable. Ma'ayan, I miss you so much and I can't wait to see you. When will you come back from the USA? Will it be after you complete the operation you have to do?. I'm sorry I haven't written in a while, I have been busy in the last few months.

Ma'ayan, I think you should know that I didn't leave the dance class, I know you are probably surprised :). I have a lot to tell you about it, I don't know where to start... After you sent me a letter with your opinion about the dance class, I thought I should wait with this decision.

You won't believe it, I'm writing this letter from Spain. I told you that my teacher had told us that we would have a competition in Spain, and only the best dancers were flying there to compete against the American, Spanish and Russian classes. I could never have imagined it, but she asked me to take part in our class.

Right now I'm waiting for the rehearsal to start. I'm so busy these days, I don’t have enough time for myself or to travel in this place. I feel stressed, and I can't stop thinking about my family and my friends. Despite this situation, I think I should be happy I have the opportunity to be in this wonderful place and to be part of this competition.

Ma'ayan, write to me about your operation and your feelings about it. Talk to me when you come back, and I hope it will be soon. Do you have any freinds there? tell me about it. Write to me about your opinion on my decision, it's very important to me.

♥ you forever,
Your cousin,
Nofar.
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Much better, but there are still a few mistakes you have to correct.
Daphna222

Our Way Of Life

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The exhibits I planned: artificial lighting and natural light are related to the topic of 'Time'. I would like to tell you about its influence, advantages and disadvantages on our lives. I hope you learn something new, and also have a great time.

The artificial lighting:

My first exhibit is the artificial lighting, which is actually the electric light. In our lives, we are influenced by the electric light. We can't forget that this invention has many advantages but it has also some disadvantages.

The electric light changes our lives totally and it changes the length of the day. People can do today many activities that they couldn't do before the lighting invention. We can work during nights, go out for fun and do exactly the same activities as we do during the day. We improve our lives thanks to the electric light.

However, the electric light damages our health . If you are tired, irritable or tense, you can blame the electric light, which causes you to sleep late and not to have the right hours you need, which is 14 hours of sleeping. It makes our lives difficult. No wonder there are many accidents, violence and students can't concentrate at school.

Finally, we can't do anything during the night without the electric light, although it has also disadvantages. I think you should plan your time to finish your activities during the day.

The natural light:

My second exhibit is the natural light which has been existent since the beginning of the world. The natural light comes before the electric light and the prehistoric man acted according to it.

On the one hand, the natural light causes us to sleep early and to have the right hours we need to sleep. We aren't tired, irritable or tense by it. Without the electric light we lead a healthier life.

On the other hand, the natural light limits the organization of our schedule. We can't do our activities during the night, because there is no light outside and we have to sleep. Our fun nights are lost and we can't go to some party or to meet our friends.

Finally, we can see that the natural light is necessary in our lives although it makes our lives harder. These two things; the electric light and the natural light make us be confused, what is good for us? the artificial lighting or the natural light? I think we will never know...

Bibliography:
http://www.time.gov/exhibits.html
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Time
http://images.google.co.il/images
http://images.google.co.il/images

This is what I'm talking about! Well done, your work now is very good. I hope you've learned something from my remarks and corrections.
Daphna.
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My trip to France

When I was eight years old my family and I traveled to Paris in France. We stayed in Paris for two weeks. It was a long time ago, but I still remember the amazing experience I had .
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When we arrived at the hotel we ammediately started out our tour around the The city of lights. We walked along the "Avenue des Champs-Élysées", we watched the Opera Building and passed the Concord Plaza. The next day we took a guide tour bus. Through the bus window we could see the Luxembourg Gardens and the Noterdum Church. Then we got off the bus and visited the Aifel Tower. On the next day we visited the Artists' Plaza, ate some pizza and drove stright to Estriex Park. I had a lot of fun in the Estriex Park. we rode the Mountain Space and rode along the "Time Tunnel".
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The most exciting adventure was Disneyland. I won't forget how I was excited to walk along the magical world of Walt Disney. I got a souvenir, which is the carton characters' signatures notebook.
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Finally, I can say it was the most exciting trip I have had in my life, and I will remember it forever. I hope to travel there again.
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Very Good Work.
Daphna.
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My Close Friend

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I have a good friend, her name is Shani. She has been one of my best friends for years. Shani looks pretty, her green eyes are deep and warmth and her hair is long and curly. She has a beautiful figure, perfect face and her smile is attractive. We met in the first grade and since then we are good friends. We have been in the same class for years.

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Shani doesn't have just the perfect look, but also the perfect personality. She is wise and has knowledge in many fields. She is always helpful, kind, and cares about everyone. When I have a problem I know she can help me with her good advices, she is always there for me.

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However, Shani is somehow lazy and she always looks out for easy ways. In my opinion she is very nervous and she can be irritated from little thing, you should keep away from her when she is nervouse.

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Finally, I can say she is the kind of a friend everyone wants to be with. I hope we will be friends when we are adults and always love each other.

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Myself And I

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I would like to tell you about myself. My name is Nofar Dvir and I am 15 years old. I live in Holon and study at the 10th grade in Kugel High School. I have brown hair, brown eyes and my height is 168 centimeters.

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In my spare time I like to do some creative art works, to talk with my friends, to meet them, to read many different articles on the net and to sleep .My hobbies are watching TV, dancing and singing. On holidays I like to travel with my family to new and interesting places. Last summer we traveled to the USA and we went the Disney World Amusement Park.

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My school Kugel is a very big and beautiful school. I like it very much because there are many trips and a lot of shows. In the other hand, I have fun in my class most of the time and the teaching is very intresting. I don't like tests and reports, but I know it's the key for my success. My favorite lessons are Mathematics and History since I succeed in these subjects and in my opinion they can develop my thinking.
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My expectations from myself are to succeed in my studies, have a good relationship with friends and enjoy myself. I hope all my wishes to succeed in my studies this New Year will be fulfilled.

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