A Letter Of complaint

36 rimon St.,
Holon.

December, 27, 2009

Mrs. Gilat Simon
Principal
High School Kugel
1 Motta Gur St,
Holon

Dear Ms. Simon,

I'm writing this letter because I wish to complain about the high price of the trip to Poland, Which prevents a lot of students from attending(ww. - taking part in) this life changing journey. Every year Israeli students and teachers go on this trip. The trip to Poland is very important to Israelis and Jews all over the world. Many children in my school want to take part in this journey, but some of them can not because of its high price.

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First of all, this trip to Poland is important and necessary for our nation, because the story of it(phr.), it is our history. We are Jewish and we can not leave the past of our nation in the past, it is a part of us. For some students in my school this journey is much more important and close to them, because their family was killed or past(ww.) the Holocaust.

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Secondly, it is important to the students in my school to represent our school with a large number of students. We feel proud to be a part of the great expedition, and we do not want that(מיותר) money problems will(gr. - to) prevent this feeling(phr.) from us. In addition, the trip includes mental preparation of us and of our parents(phr.), and it also includes practical preparation of the school, this means we have to give an additional payment of money(phr.).

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In conclusion, it is unfair that a large group of students, who (have) waited to go on this journey in expectation(ww.), will have do(ww. - to) dill(sp.) with the fact that they won’t flay(sp.) to Poland because of financial problems. I hope you will take seriously my complaint about the high price of the trip. I would appreciate your efforts and it seems to me that you(should) find a solution to this urgent problem.

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I look forward to a prompt reply.
Yours truly,

Nofar Dvir.

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