The Internet Phenomenon

In the last years the internet became an important part of our lives. The internet is a web that people use to improve their life. We can’t live for one a day without the internet; it might sound stupid, but this is our reality. Some people (verb?) against the phenomenon of using the internet, but we can all see that the Internet has changed our lives- for better or worse.

The positive side of the internet includes the ability to use useful things. Such as the email, which allows us comminute(ww.) from far places and sign up to websites(phr. - what do you mean? and how do you relate that to the first part of your sentence). For some people the internet is their work. They, spend all of their time on the computer, surfing the internet and looking for opportunities to find worth while deals and improve their business career. Also, You can find a lot of activities that may attract you, such as games, chat rooms and social networks.

The negative side of the internet includes violence, pornography, lack of physical activities and strangers people. Children are exposed to violence when they chat with strange people. The pornography is open to everyone, so young children can watch pornographic substance. Furthermore, people who spend a lot of their time on the internet neglect their fitness(and how is all of that bad?).

In my opinion, the internet is an important invention, it includes very useful things, such as opportunities to use the email, improve your business, being exposed to new languages etc. But in order to use all of the benefits of the internet we must be very careful from the impropriate substance, like porn and chats with unknown people. It also influences our fitness and way of life. To sum up, I think we should use the internet wisely and be aware of the advantages and disadvantages of using it.

Good.

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Daphna.

B.F.F ?!

All day long we talk about our friends and their behavior. We love to criticize them and decide if they are good enough for us and if they deserve us. We think that our friends should be the closest to us, like we love to say “BFF” (Best Friends Forever). But think of it, do we really know what the meaning of a good friend is?

From my point of view, I believe, that a good friend should have some specific qualities that would show that he can be a good friend for me. First of all, if my friend really likes me, he has to act like a person that really cares about me. Giving a person the feeling that there is someone for him makes him feel secured. A friend should also be considerate and patient. For example, there are situations that you feel bad and a good friend(verb?) supposed to be there with you and make you feel better, even if it requires a lot of patience and consideration.

Moreover, a friend should be loyal. If your friend is not loyal, it shows that he is not the good friend you have thought he is. A good friend is a friend that wouldn’t go and talk about me behind my back; he needs to give me the feeling that I can trust him. People don’t like that someone criticizes their behavior, but I think that a good friend should come over and tell me that I was wrong and try to help me change my way of thinking and acting.

I think that a good friend is a person that (verb?) willing to sacrifice himself for me. In my world, my closest friends are more important than my family. After all, who really knows what you are going through? I recommend you all to be good friends; you don’t want to lose some of your friends just because you were wrong. After all, no body wants to be lonely.

Good work. Please correct your work to make it perfect.

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Daphna

Team Sports For the Win :P

In these days we can see many kinds of sports. There are two kinds of sports, the first one is individual sports, such as jogging, biking and swimming. The second is team sports, such as football and basketball. Some people prefer team sports and others prefer individual sports.

Team sports are sports that people do together, in groups. The team sports gives people the ability to work in a team and for the team. The fact that people are working together makes everyone want to improve for the team. People will do anything to win, which leads them to be fit.

But when someone takes part in a team, he wants to prove himself, and to be better than the other members in the team. The feeling of being the best makes the team be not united. Working in a team can make people feel that their best is not enough, and it may reduce their motivation .

In my opinion, people should do sports team(phr.), inspite of the bad influence it has on people, I think that the good influence on them(phr.) is more significant. I am a competitive person, and I believe it makes us more motivated. I hope that people who do not feel comfortable in a team will understand how much the team can help them.

Not bad, but it needs some more work.

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Daphna

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New Year ^^

12^th grade … (: