Saturday, October 23, 2010

The Internet Phenomenon


In the last years the internet became an important part of our lives. The internet is a web that people use to improve their life. We can’t live for one a day without the internet; it might sound stupid, but this is our reality. Some people (verb?) against the phenomenon of using the internet, but we can all see that the Internet has changed our lives- for better or worse.


The positive side of the internet includes the ability to use useful things. Such as the email, which allows us comminute(ww.) from far places and sign up to websites(phr. - what do you mean? and how do you relate that to the first part of your sentence). For some people the internet is their work. They, spend all of their time on the computer, surfing the internet and looking for opportunities to find worth while deals and improve their business career. Also, You can find a lot of activities that may attract you, such as games, chat rooms and social networks.


The negative side of the internet includes violence, pornography, lack of physical activities and strangers people. Children are exposed to violence when they chat with strange people. The pornography is open to everyone, so young children can watch pornographic substance. Furthermore, people who spend a lot of their time on the internet neglect their fitness(and how is all of that bad?).


In my opinion, the internet is an important invention, it includes very useful things, such as opportunities to use the email, improve your business, being exposed to new languages etc. But in order to use all of the benefits of the internet we must be very careful from the impropriate substance, like porn and chats with unknown people. It also influences our fitness and way of life. To sum up, I think we should use the internet wisely and be aware of the advantages and disadvantages of using it.

Good.

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Daphna.

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